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Title:
Close To Me (5/5)
Author: [profile] biffyhouse
Rating: NC-17, contains bad language and, well, y'know.
Pairing: J2
Word count: 3314
Disclaimer: A work of fiction in no way reflecting the true nature of Jared and Jensen's beautiful relationship.... more's the pity.
Author's note: Sorry for the delay in this final chapter, things have been very busy here of late! I hope you guys enjoy this one, I certainly had fun writing it. Hugs for [profile] nayden for getting this back mega quick once again. Comments are very welcome and much loved, after all I did write this for you lot to squee over :D

Summary: After being caught in the act, how can Jensen and Jared keep their new relationship a secret?

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Jensen and Jared stood staring at each other as Mike’s raucous laughter was abruptly cut off by the bathroom door shutting behind him.

“Jared….” Jensen’s voice was barely a whisper.

Jared turned away and leaned heavily against the sink. Dropping his chin to his chest he muttered, “What the fuck do we do now?”

“Jay, I’m so sorry, I didn’t…” Jensen started babbling.

Jared whirled around to face him, his eyes blazing.

“I said what the fuck are we supposed to do now?” he yelled, advancing on Jensen, who just stood there helpless. Jared gripped Jensen by the shoulders, only just stopping himself in time from shaking the poor guy. “Mike is never going to keep his mouth shut about this. We’re ruined. Fucking ruined!”

Jensen stared up into Jared’s glistening eyes and saw all the pain that the last 24 hours had caused. He wished he could make it go away. But it was too late. Jared was right.

They were in big trouble.

If Mike told just one person (which knowing him would be more like 20) then the rumours would spread and their careers were effectively over. And all because they’d been dumb enough to give into their feelings in a public bathroom. The very thought of that made Jensen’s stomach turn.

He didn’t care what happened to him.

Sure, this was going to cause a media storm and he’d most likely be turned on by his family and friends, but the thing that bothered Jensen the most was what this would do to Jared. He couldn’t bear to think of him hurting like this. Couldn’t stand the thought of Jared being hounded by the press, being made a laughing stock, and in all probability getting fired from Supernatural. Most of all Jensen couldn’t bear the thought that this was all his own fault, and by doing what he thought was best in telling Jared of his feelings, he had actually done the biggest damage possible.

He knew that the only way to salvage the situation and to stop Jared from losing everything would be to find Mike. And fast.

Shrugging off Jared’s firm grip on his shoulders, Jensen ran to the bathroom door and pulled it open. Out in the bar, everything seemed so normal that it was almost surreal to Jensen. Walking straight to the booth where they had been sitting Jensen braced himself for the onslaught that was inevitably waiting there.

The booth was empty.

Spinning on his heels, Jensen scanned the room desperately trying to find Mike.

He wasn’t there.

“Shit!” he muttered under his breath.

Scurrying over to the blondes at the bar, Jensen asked them, “Have you seen my friend? The guy with the shaved head?” They hadn’t. Mike must have left as soon as he’d walked in on him and Jared. Jensen hoped to hell he hadn’t gone to tell someone straight away, or they were completely fucked already.

Heading back to the bathroom, Jensen found Jared leaning back against the wall, with his eyes screwed shut.

“Dude, Mike’s gone. I don’t know where the fuck he went but I do know we need to get out of here right now and find him.”

Jared snapped open his eyes. “Oh yeah. We’re gonna find him alright. And then I’m gonna fucking kill him,” he grated, bursting out into the bar.

“Oh shit,” Jensen muttered to himself, running after Jared’s long strides, “this is going to be nasty.”


~


By the time Jensen had caught up with Jared, calmed him down enough to listen to reason and convinced him to come back to his apartment it was getting on for 1am.

On the drive back, Jared sat in the passenger seat with his arms crossed and his brow furrowed. Jensen figured it was probably best not to start an argument in the car so he kept his mouth shut and concentrated on the road.

Pulling into the driveway, Jensen’s headlights briefly illuminated a hunched shape sitting on his doorstep. Jensen cut the lights and squinted out the windscreen.

“What the hell..?” he murmured, just loud enough for Jared to hear and causing his head to snap up.

“I don’t fucking believe it,” Jared was out of the car and striding purposefully across the drive before Jensen had even realised he had the door open. “You’ve got a fucking nerve coming here now.”

Mike lifted his head from his knees and peered up at Jared, whose sheer size could make him look pretty intimidating on occasion. This was such an occasion.

“Look, Jared I….” Mike started to rise.

“No. I don’t want to hear it. You’re a troublemaker, always have been,” Jared pushed Mike back down onto the step and loomed over him. “You were a complete jerk tonight, you know that? You’re lucky I don’t…”

“Jared. Stop it,” Jensen tried holding onto Jared’s arm but he just shrugged him off.

“Jen, stay out of this. I know he’s your friend and all but right now I don’t care. The guy’s a fucking idiot,” Jared grabbed hold of Mike’s collar and pulled him upright. Pushing his face right into Mike’s he hissed, “What happens between me and Jensen is none of your fucking business, OK? And if I ever find out that you’ve breathed a word about this I will kill you. Understand? I will hunt you down and kill you.”

“Jared, I’m sorry! I didn’t mean to…” Mike was babbling and trying to loosen Jared’s grip on his jacket.

Jared pulled back his fist and was about to take a swing when Jensen grabbed a hold of him from behind and hauled him off Mike.

“For fuck’s sake Jared, leave the guy alone! He said he was sorry. He won’t say anything. Will you Mike?” Jensen glared pointedly at Mike, who was visibly trembling.

“Of course I won’t. Jesus. I never would have anyway.”

Jared suddenly went limp in Jensen’s arms, like the adrenaline rush had left him weak. He looked up at Mike, who took a step backwards and held his palms out in a show of innocence.

“What you guys do in your spare time is no one’s business but your own. I admit I was being an asshole tonight and I’m sorry. I guess I got a little carried away. But I swear to God I would never do anything to hurt you guys.”

Jared shook off Jensen’s grip on his arm and marched irritably into the apartment. Jensen waited until he had slammed the door before turning to Mike.

“You really mean that?” he asked, “You won’t say anything about what you saw?”

“Of course not, man. I guess you two have enough to work out without worrying about what everyone else is going to think too. Just take one thing at a time.”

Jensen smiled wryly. “One thing at a time. And the first thing is trying to convince Jared that this isn’t a complete disaster.”

“Good luck with that.” Mike slapped Jensen affectionately on the back as he made his way down the drive and off down the sidewalk.

Jensen stood staring at his front door for a few moments before sighing deeply and going inside.


~


Jared was sitting on Jensen’s sofa, clutching at a cushion and staring straight ahead. Jensen paused in the doorway before heading to the kitchen and making some coffee. Better to give Jared a few more minutes to calm down.

Jensen placed the steaming mug down in front of Jared and then sat down on the sofa next to him and waited. He wasn’t quite sure where to start.

“Look, Jay, I know tonight didn’t exactly go to plan but…”

“I was being a jerk,” Jared interrupted.

“Yeah. You were. But I probably would have done the same thing,” Jensen placed his mug on the coffee table and turned to face Jared. Reaching out for his arm he pulled Jared closer towards him. Jared didn’t resist.

“Is it always going to be this hard?” Jared mumbled into Jensen’s shoulder.

“I don’t know. I hope not. But you know I’ll always be here. Nothing’s changed, really. Mike won’t tell anyone, I made sure of that. And I still feel the same way about you, Jay,” Jensen smoothed Jared’s hair away from his forehead and shifted around so that Jared could lean his head on Jensen’s lap.

They stayed that way for a long time, talking about nothing and everything, until finally Jared’s eyelids drooped and his breathing deepened.

“Hey. Hey Jay. Come on, man. We should get you into bed. You can’t sleep here, my couch isn’t big enough!” Jensen managed to get Jared upright, steered him into the bedroom and tucked up under the covers.

Leaning down he whispered into Jared’s ear, “I love you.”

Jared shifted slightly, opened one eye and tried to focus on Jensen’s face, just inches away. “I love you too,” he murmured, smiling sleepily.


~


Next morning, Jared awoke first. Amazingly he didn’t have a hangover, and as soon as he opened his eyes and saw the sunlight streaming in through Jensen’s curtains he smiled to himself. He was exactly where he wanted to be, with the man he loved and who loved him in return. He rolled over and watched Jensen sleeping soundly at his side. He looked peaceful and content, and so damn beautiful at the same time; Jared found it hard to resist reaching out and stroking his freckled cheek.

Deciding to leave Jensen to get a bit more rest after the crazy couple of days they had had, Jared quietly slid out of bed, pulled on an old sweatshirt he found on the dresser and wandered down to Jensen’s kitchen. The place looked like a bomb had hit it. Jensen had obviously had things on his mind other than cleaning in the last few days. Starting with the stack of dishes in the sink, Jared was glad to have something to keep his hands occupied for a while, as his mind wandered back to everything that had passed between the two of them since that fateful visit to the bar two nights ago.

As he dried the dishes, Jared laughed to himself as he remembered how stupid he had been walking out of his apartment with the note still in his hand. He giggled as he stacked the plates in the cupboard and thought of the look on Jensen’s face when he’d woken Jared up in that not-so-conventional way.

Thinking about all this made Jared long to be in Jensen’s arms, laughing together about what idiots they had been before they realised what they both really wanted. Rummaging in the cupboard, he decided breakfast in bed would be a great way to start the day and show Jensen how much he wanted this to work between them.

Padding softly back down the hallway to the bedroom, Jared placed the tray on his empty side of the bed and drew back one of the curtains, letting the early morning sunlight flicker across Jensen’s face.

“Good morning sleepy head,” he cooed softly into Jensen’s ear.

Jensen rubbed his eyes and grinned widely as he took in Jared sitting cross-legged on the side of the bed wearing one of his sweatshirts, and with a tray of coffee and blueberry muffins balanced precariously on his knees.

“Hey. You stayed.”

“Yeah, you’re not getting rid of me this time,” Jared smirked as he passed a mug across to Jensen, and placed the plate next to his pillow.

“Well, that’s a good thing I guess, ‘cause I don’t exactly what to get rid of you now do I?” Jensen took a sip of the scalding coffee and then set it down on his bedside table. “So am I going to get breakfast in bed every time you stay over?”

“Only if you ask nicely,” giggled Jared through a mouthful of muffin, spraying crumbs all over the covers.

“Dude! Don’t waste the muffins! I made them myself you know. Mama’s secret recipe.” Jensen tried to wrestle the muffin out of Jared’s hand but he simply held it higher than Jensen could reach and laughed.

“That’s funny, I didn’t know you were one of the Fabulous Baker Boys,” Jared leaned back, muffin out of reach.

Jensen leaned forward and tried to swipe it from Jared’s grasp but lost his balance and ended up pushing Jared onto his back and landing right on his chest. Jared was somehow still holding onto the muffin.

“Want a bite?” he teased Jensen, waving the muffin in front of his face.

“Not particularly,” Jensen giggled, before covering Jared’s mouth with his own and kissing him deeply.

Dropping the muffin on the floor, Jared eagerly returned the kiss, pushing his tongue inside Jensen’s mouth and holding the back of his head so he couldn’t escape. Jensen squeaked and tried to pull back for air but Jared was too strong. Rolling Jensen over onto his back, he glanced round as he knocked the plate of muffins off the bed. Jensen took the opportunity to get his own back, and leaning forward he nipped Jared gently on the neck and ran his hands up the inside of Jared’s sweatshirt. The muffins were soon forgotten as Jared turned his attention back to Jensen and started kissing his neck, slowly moving down to his smooth chest until his found Jensen’s rock hard nipple with his tongue, while his hand moved stealthily down towards Jensen’s stomach. Jensen put his own hands above his head and he surrendered to the wonderful feeling of Jared’s hot kisses on his chest. As Jared bit gently down on his nipple, Jensen bucked underneath him, a ripple of pleasure coursing throughout his body.

Grabbing hold of the sweatshirt, Jensen roughly yanked it off over Jared’s head and pulled him closer, thrilled at the touch of skin on skin. Somehow when they were lying down Jared didn’t seem so tall; their bodies seemed to fit together perfectly.

Jensen ran his fingers down Jared’s spine and under the waistband of his boxers, grabbing his ass and pushing Jared’s groin into his own. Jared responded by pushing himself up away from Jensen’s chest and grinding his erection into him.

Jensen reached forward and gently teased his hand inside the front of Jared’s boxers this time. Gently stroking Jared’s erection with one hand, Jensen pulled the boxers down with the other and helped Jared to wriggle out of them completely. This was the first time Jensen had seen Jared completely naked and he certainly approved of what he saw. Pulling Jared back down on top of him, Jensen took Jared’s cock in both hands and started to jerk him off; slowly at first, enjoying the look on Jared’s face as he tried to keep his balance with his hands planted either side of Jensen’s head.

Jared was moaning and making the most obscene noises as he started to thrust in and out of Jensen’s hands encircling his cock. He could feel his orgasm coming, he knew he was teetering on the edge and it was the most amazing feeling. He’d never imagined that having Jensen’s hands on him could make him feel like this. Barely able to catch his breath or keep his eyes open, Jared came with an ear-splitting groan of Jensen’s name and collapsed on top of him.

Jensen giggled and whispered into Jared’s ear, “OK you had your fun, now it’s my turn,” and pushed a breathless Jared away to one side.

Propping himself up on one elbow and looking down at Jensen’s bulging shorts, Jared bit on his lip and moaned, “Oh baby, you look good enough to eat.”

Leaning down again, and starting at Jensen’s lightly stubbled jaw, he trailed tiny kisses down Jensen’s neck, across his chest, down to his stomach. As Jared moved down Jensen’s body, Jensen’s fingers trailed up his spine until Jared’s head was in his hands. Stopping for a moment, breathing gently on Jensen’s abdomen, Jared looked up at Jensen for a moment before yanking the shorts down and taking Jensen’s cock in his mouth.

Jensen grabbed a handful of soft brown hair and moaned in ecstasy as Jared’s head bobbed up and down. As Jared’s tongue flicked rapidly across the head of Jensen’s cock he had to ask in between gasps, “Jesus….. My god, you are good at that. You sure you’ve never given a blow job before?”

“Uh-uh,” hummed Jared, causing Jensen to groan even louder, the vibrations inside Jared’s mouth sending him wild.

Jensen knew he couldn’t hold out much longer, but he wanted Jared so bad it was all he could do to stop himself from coming spectacularly into Jared’s mouth.

Reluctantly pulling Jared’s head away from his cock and sliding out from underneath him, Jensen scrambled to his bedside cabinet and pulled out a condom and some lube. Jared’s eyes nearly popped out of his head, and then he grinned widely.

“Turn over. Now,” Jensen commanded as he rolled on the rubber and slicked himself up. Jared obeyed without a word and even grabbed a pillow and pushed it underneath his groin.

“Oh yeah baby I think you’re gonna love this,” Jensen hissed into Jared’s ear as he gently eased one slicked up finger inside Jared’s ass and crooked the end slightly. Jared tensed up as Jensen moved his finger slowly further inside.

“It’s alright Jay, I’m not going to hurt you baby,” Jensen whispered, “We can take it as slow as you like.”

Jared moaned loudly as Jensen’s finger hit the spot.

The sound almost made Jensen come straight away.

Jared gripped the covers tightly and turned his head to the side and muttered through gritted teeth, “Not slow. Please, Jen, I need to feel you inside me. Now. Please.” He whimpered as Jensen pulled his finger out and positioned his cock at Jared’s entrance.

Slowly but firmly pushing himself inside Jared, Jensen felt his balls tighten and had to take a moment to calm himself. The minute he realised he was buried balls-deep inside Jared’s ass though, Jensen forgot everything he had just said about taking things slowly.

Thrusting in and almost all the way out, Jensen gripped the covers with one hand and Jared’s hip with the other. Jared had his head buried in a pillow and was panting Jensen’s name in time with Jensen’s movements. He spread his legs even wider like he couldn’t get enough of Jensen inside him.

“Holy fuck…. Jay ……” Jensen grunted as he felt himself coming close to possibly the most earth shattering orgasm of his life. He could hardly believe that only 2 days ago they had been just best friends and now he was having the best sex he’d ever had.

Jared was now almost squirming around on the bed and Jensen couldn’t concentrate on keeping hold of him and prolonging the inevitable. Pushing Jared down into the bed and digging his fingers into his ass, Jensen gave in to his orgasm with a great shout.

Seconds later Jared himself came a second time, Jensen’s name once again on his lips.

The pair of them collapsed on the bed and lay in each other’s arms, trying to catch their breath. Jensen snuggled up tightly to Jared’s side and sighed contentedly. Jared wrapped one huge arm around Jensen’s shoulder and planted a quick kiss on his forehead.

Jensen looked up at Jared and smiled. “You know, that is quite possibly the best wake up I have had in a very long time.”

Jared nodded in agreement, “I think I have to agree with you there. But you know there’s one thing that could make it better.”

“What’s that?”

Jared reached down the side of the bed and came back up holding something slightly squashed and very sticky.

“Muffin?” he smirked, and pushed it into Jensen’s unresisting mouth.



Date: 2007-10-22 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dare-to-dream06.livejournal.com
*giggles*
very awesome way to end this fic darling.
and Mikey! ugh. *squees* yay. he was being such a good boy *pets him*

=)

just wonderful.
loved it <3

Date: 2007-10-22 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dare-to-dream06.livejournal.com
ps. the last chapter of 'you've got mail' is up. =) woooooo.

*giggles*

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Date: 2007-10-22 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
*lol* first and second and third! well, almost anyway ;)

yay! I'm glad you liked it :D I told you to keep the Mikey faith.

i'm off to read the last part of yours now! it's a day of good endings I hope :D

Date: 2007-10-22 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mesus-04.livejournal.com
“Muffin?”
Hehe, I liked that just at the end! lol. This was a great fic, I really enjoyed reading it, thank you! :)

Date: 2007-10-22 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story :D

Date: 2007-10-22 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nayden.livejournal.com
pure gold my woman *squeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

Date: 2007-10-22 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
*squees with you*

I shall never look at another muffin in the same way :D

ooh ooh and your icon is working now! *flails*

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Date: 2007-10-22 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sammyndeansgrl1.livejournal.com
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! It can't be over! I refuse to believe that it's over! *stomps foot*
*points 2 computer*
GO WRITE MORE! *stomps foot again*

Seriously, that was really good - and the sexin? *THUD*

Date: 2007-10-22 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
awwwwwwwwww hun you're too kind! LOL

seriously, I would love to write some more and there's always room for a sequel but I've just got so much stuff on at the moment, there's not enough time. Ah well, I shall just have to make do with reading other ppl's (like yours!) for the time being :)

I'm glad you liked the smexing, I was reeeeeeeally scared of writing that! First time for my boys in the story and first time for me so it's nice to know I pulled it off (so to speak) ;)

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Date: 2007-10-22 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apieceofcake.livejournal.com
Nice ending :-) Thank you!

Date: 2007-10-22 10:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

Date: 2007-10-22 11:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anakin415.livejournal.com
awwwwww & hawt !!!!!

Date: 2007-10-22 11:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
teehee thankies! equal measures of naughty and cute, that's my boys all over :D

It can't get better than this :D

Date: 2007-10-22 11:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atsugari8.livejournal.com
With the comical ending of the last chapter,I wasn't expecting this chapter to begin with angst but when Jared said "Is it always going to be this hard?", it made me realise how real the fear was for Jared and Jensen, how serious the situation was of being found out. They were just lucky that it was Mike and not someone else. I thought that sentiment was captured quiet well :).

Breakfast in bed served with Jared on the side was just delicious!! It was warm, intimate and of course hot :D (Mmmmmm... Bottom Jared is the best).

Lovely Lovely series!! I hate to see it end!

Re: It can't get better than this :D

Date: 2007-10-23 04:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
thankies so much for your lovely comment once again :D

I'm a total bottom Jared girl. There's not enough of it around IMO!

Date: 2007-10-23 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blazonparadox.livejournal.com
It's over? *pout-age* Me likey mucho. I can't wait to see what you write next! *squee*

Date: 2007-10-23 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
*g*

awww thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I have a couple of things in my head but not much time to write at the mo *sobs*

Date: 2007-10-23 07:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kuhekabir.livejournal.com
That was a joy to read. Thank you for sharing. :)

Date: 2007-10-23 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
no problem! glad you liked :)

Date: 2007-10-23 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zombean.livejournal.com
Awww we all know that Mikey is just a big softie at heart :) Plus, he's probably doing Tom so its not like he'd let the Padackles cat out of the bag, lol!!
Awesome fic, short enough so that I didn't lose interest, but not so short that we didn't see some nice characterisation in there! *thumbs up*

Date: 2007-10-23 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
thanks so much :D

hehe, yeah Mikey's a total pussycat really and you're probably spot on with the Tom thing ;)

thankyou for your comment and the thumbs up!

Date: 2007-10-23 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sauvageonne.livejournal.com
Awesome story !!!
Love it !!!
And Mikey is priceless !!!

Date: 2007-10-23 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
thankyou very much, I'm so glad you like it :D

Date: 2007-10-23 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] andi-pf.livejournal.com
I like this story. :) With each chapter it just got better and better.


One question though: How am I supposed to not snigger when I buy muffins?

Date: 2007-10-23 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
teehee, thanks hun *hug*

I know, I won't be able to look at muffins the same way again!

Date: 2007-10-24 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] livsnddark.livejournal.com
*sigh*
Oh good, all is well, the boys are together!
Muffins! Sweet, love that. =D

Date: 2007-10-24 10:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
yes, all is well and they will be happy together now *yay*

thanks for your comment *huggles*

Date: 2007-10-24 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trueshellz.livejournal.com
heeee
love this
total awesome

Date: 2007-10-24 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
thaaaaaaankyou! *hugs*

Date: 2007-10-24 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sammynce.livejournal.com
Really awesome! Love this last part!
hope you will write more.
Really really good

Date: 2007-10-24 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
why thankyou so much :D

I hope I get to write more too, I have a couple of ideas but not very much time at the moment *le sigh*

Date: 2007-10-28 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shelgrainger2.livejournal.com
Wow that was a rollercoaster ride of emotions for the boys lol! I did have to laugh at Jared taking the note with him, twit! I am just glad they finally got it together and worked it all out. A great read.

Date: 2007-11-05 12:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-muso.livejournal.com
Oh that was so awesome :)

I read all the chaps at once and YAY!!

*showers you with hugs and cookies*

Cant wait to read this again :)

Date: 2007-11-05 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
yay! aww thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D

*gladly accepts the hugs and stuffs face with cookies*

Date: 2007-12-29 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lycaness.livejournal.com
Holy God Damn that was hot!!!
I'm really glad Mike turned out to be the good guy and it really seemed like he understood.
Stupid Jared for walking out with the real note in his hand *eye roll* it seemed like no matter what happened something was always against them trying to make them give up, I'm so glad they didn't. :D
I loved this, thanks for sharing. :D

Date: 2007-12-30 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
aww thanks so much for your lovely comment :D

I didn't expect to have people reading this fic so long after I'd posted it but it's great you did!

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Date: 2008-01-07 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icymorning.livejournal.com
blueberry muffins are my favorite.

and now everytime i'm going to have one, i'll think of that scene.

starbucks is never going to be the same for me again, ever.

Date: 2008-01-20 04:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] deanshot1
This was put in as a rec in [livejournal.com profile] spn_first_time and I jsut had to leave a comment to say that this was an excellent story.
I loved the fact that Mike said he would never tell anyone.
I want a muffin no after reading the last chapter, *sighs*.
It was heart warming as well as emotional and funny in parts.

Date: 2008-01-20 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] biffyhouse.livejournal.com
Awww what a lovely comment, thanks so much!!

I saw these comments on this fic just now and wondered what on earth was going on seeing as I finished this one in November. It's lovely that my fic has been recced again :D

And yes, many muffins were consumed after this chapter was finished ;)

Date: 2008-02-22 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wuzzlybear.livejournal.com
Very nice story.

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